What's wrong with this heading?
Exciting plans for SJB unveiled
Clue: it has something to do with the rule "Show don't tell"
Apparently for newspaper headings, you don't include unnecessary adjectives to express opinion (i.e. exciting). Just 'show' what has happened or been done.
Trees to be planted at SJB
or
SJB's green corridor to be extended
Another lesson to learn . . .
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